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  1. The_Bluejay_55 on Chapter 2 Thu 30 May 2024 03:44PM UTC

    First, I have to say whoever helped you make the little pictures and the texts and stuff- WOW they're incredible. I was already impressed last chapter, but The texts especially made everything super cool and immersive. Maruki's right though. That was not a fun fact at all.
    "It wouldn’t have made sense for him to wear his lab coat to the clean-up, but seeing him without it on still felt scandalous in a way you couldn’t explain" lolololol oh that had me rolling a little bit but mostly because it's oddly TRUE. I love him
    "Your line of sight kept locking onto his forearms, revealed by the neatly-folded sleeves of his dress shirt" Yeah. Yeah it did.
    The houseplant conversation lmao that was so incredibly funny sjduuwudhs I love your writing so much. And then the instant drop in the mood though. Maruki you make me so sad- but man that conversation that bloomed after all of that? That was really good. Honestly having any sort of conversation with Maruki would probably be amazing. He's so good at listening /and/ talking.
    "a new familiarity in the way he looked at you, like the light around you had shifted and he was the only one who could see it change." That was beautiful. I really liked that line.
    Overall- amazing chapter again. I ate every bit of it UP. You're so good at dialogue and your narration flows so well- plus a love how committed you are to making things accurate. Thank you for the desk evidence XD you've put so much effort and love into this fic-ahhhhh! I'm enjoying it so much, I don't really want to catch up, I want to make it last

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