My deep love of the way you write Loki in this fic is only matched by the fiercely broken way you write Tony as well, and how they're starting to get along based on a sort of brutal, desperate honesty their situations have brought them down to. It's viciously gorgeous, and addictive and wonderful.
Yeah, I don't know if you picked up in the beginning that Tony was way too blase' with Pepper's death, he's far more broken than he's let on so far. Hope you keep on liking the story!
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Like_a_Hurricane on Chapter 10 Tue 01 Apr 2014 11:30AM UTC
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