I know I've said this before but I love the way you take drabbles and use them to tell a story. Like they're all interconnected and flow together so well. It makes it an absolute delight to read!
Anyway, I love Kain so much. He is just so determined in that first drabble and then I love how you find out why in the very last one. Jealousy can be one powerful motivator. This line is so beautiful: He appeared under her window one night, flowers in hand and the moonlight highlighting him like the hero in a romantic tale. That must've been so painful watching Rosa and Cecil together. I understand his jealousy. It's so hard wondering 'why.' I also love that Cecil finally betrayed Odin. Everyone always has their breaking point...apparently Cecil's was genocide. And LOVE how you end this with the simple 'How?'
Anyway again, wonderful job. I always love your writing so much! ❤️
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Jovirose on Chapter 4 Tue 25 Jun 2024 09:59PM UTC
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