Comment on Love's a Game (Wanna Play?)

  1. crowstakeflight (seresindiaz) on Chapter 1 Wed 07 Aug 2024 10:53PM UTC

    ok i love the detail you included of the things jake has done previously (very unfortunate they all ended up with him getting hurt)

    jake, jess, johanna, yeah i can see the seresins being a family that does the all one letter names

    jake you have a forever plus one with javy, your brother

    jake knowing he can go to javy for help (imagine me using the nodding emoji here)

    javy's "what did you do" LMAOOOO can't hide anything from him

    javy: this is real life not a romcom
    me: well actually...

    me thinking of things to say that could make this a plan that works with what they want even though it needed to work out the way it did for this fic to happen LOL (the bf could have something come up that made him not able to come until the wedding day)

    "shut the fuck up" LMAOOOOOO oh me and javy are the same rn this is so funny for jake like of course the only option is bradley (bc soulmates)

    JAVY SEEING BRADLEY GIVE JAKE LONGING LOOKSD FISDJFLKSDFJSDKFL WHY HAVE THE DAGGERS NOT HAD AN INTERVENTION FOR THEM

    ahhh jake and bradley continuing their greeting i love it

    me thinking about how jake could so ask bradley to go out with him for real and have a positive reaction and jake's worried about bradley saying no to the fake bf thing

    IS BRADLEY GOING TO WALK OUTSIDE TO CHECK ON JAKE?????

    YEAHHHHHHHHH AND WITH A BEER FOR JAKE

    bradley is so kind and considerate i love him sm

    BRADLEYYYYYY SAYING HE WOULD DO IT IKNEW I COULD COUNT ON YOU I LOVE YOU (me acting like that wasnt happening all along lmao)

    me: ok now kiss

    IM SMILING SO BIG THEY ARE FAKE BFS SOON TO BE REAL BFS IN A FEW CHAPTERS LETS GO

    them teasing each other all is right with the world

    "you're not allowed to fall in love with me" NO bradley why would you say this

    hehe so glad i get to read the rest of this soon this fic is so fun i love it already

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    1. indybob on Chapter 1 Thu 15 Aug 2024 12:57AM UTC

      I’m so glad you enjoyed this first chapter, it was so much fun to write from Jake’s pov for the first time in quite some time, and develop his relationships with his family!

      I’m glad you’re enjoying the story so far, and I’m hoping you’ll enjoy the rest of this story as well!!🩵

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