Comment on The Diva's Paean

  1. kagaymine_rin on Chapter 8 Sat 10 Aug 2024 07:51AM UTC

    I wish I could just leave like, a kudos on this fic for every chapter. maybe for every time i think about it, too (it comes up on my dashboard whenever i open my profile). but I suppose I could just leave a comment this time, almost two years late from the most recent update, like the silly little guy i am- (i promise i wont leave a comment every time I think about it though, because that would be annoying!)

    man I am a Sucker for fantasy AU rinlens, which, unfortunately but very much predictably, are a scarce commodity, especially nowadays. so every time I revisit this fic I am just cronching, monching, enjoying the feast, the meal, inhaling it kirby-style, screaming crying throwing up shidding my pants etc. etc. vice versa so on so forth. just - the world building, man, it's so good. idk how to world a build without sending the reader to sleep so i am just in awe, appreciative of the dedication really. like there are still so many things i want to know, so many questions i've got about the divas and paeans and the fate of the world and the demons and mannnn i could write an essay.

    also len- there is nothing more delectable, amazing, succulent, incredible, delicious, tasty, scrumptious than a len who would Kill a Man for a rin that he's known for merely a hot minute. it makes me want to scream (in delight and delusion). also just yessss i love darkness kagamines. Darkness Magic Kagamines, My Beloved. my little sunshines who are also capable of the horrors!!!!!!! YESSS!!! len with black feathers, he's giving me howl, he's giving me soleil, he's giving wretched creature devoid of whimsy im just banging my fists on the imaginary table here going hogwild

    rin's characterisation too - pessimistic, confused, impostor syndrome - she's got it all. i love her. i just want to see her bloom.

    and the narrative voice... easy to follow, witty, yet descriptive and insightful. one of the main reasons i can go back and reread this fic again and again.

    maybe i am delusional (i am) wanting to see this fic someday be updated after almost two years of silence but yknow... a girl can dream, haha... but this fic still deserves the 1 million kudos and 1 million comments even being unfinished. even so, im summoning this pic here bc it needs to be done. (god i hope this works i have barely touched html with a ten foot pole in the past 10 years. would be a bit embarrassing if not.)

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    1. Huinari on Chapter 8 Sun 11 Aug 2024 06:19AM UTC

      Ahhhhh this is such a lovely comment thank you so much for your kind words!!! Honestly I was convinced that no one else really wanted to read this so don't worry you're not annoying and wouldn't be.

      Well, the Shrek circle calls me, better get writing.

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