Hello! When I began the fic i thought i went overboard with the world building (it's zelda! everyone knows what to expect going in). But in the recent chapters i've just decided to dive headfirst into it lol. I'm glad you picked up what I was trying to say about his thoughts on Robbie. Revali really can't believe that THIS GUY was labeled head researcher lol. Everything else in your comment on Revali's character is spot on. The childlike games he plays when he thinks no one is looking, the disappointment he feels towards himself when he wants MORE -- everything. Thank you again for this comment <3
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notthatdio on Chapter 2 Sun 11 Aug 2024 07:53PM UTC
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