I first and foremost just want to express how much of a privilege enjoying this fic was. Remastered with art????? Truly truly it was such a gift to find. Same excitement as Christmas morning.
I can’t even begin to tell you how wonderful your writing is. I was so engrossed in this story I had to stop myself from reading it at red lights when I was driving. I had to stop myself feeling reading it at work (I did fail at that but it was worth it)
The hurt that that our Hizashi goes through ? You described it in a way that the pain was almost palpable. I am gonna have feelings for DAYS. You write their dynamic so beautifully it feels organic, and when they felt a raw emotion— I as the reader did too.
The OC’s in this were really good, you really fleshed out your characters and gave us a reason to dislike/like them, as well as understand their motives.
I could ramble forever but I’m gonna stop myself from doing so so I can just take a bit to really absorb and process the story I just read. But all in all:
I might come back and comment more about this once I’ve had a chance to come up with more, but really truly bravo. You’ve left me speechless and I can’t wait to read the next work 🩷
This is one of the nicest comments i have ever received; thank you SO SO SO much for your kind words and feedback!!! i am still really proud of this story, and put a lot of time into making it what it is- now that it had been posted on ao3 for a bit, i don't get so much interaction with it anymore, so anytime anyone stops to make a comment, it s a real treat!
Your comment was beyond that and i am so thankful for it!!!! i appreciate your readership, your feedback, and your enthusiasm so much! Yours is the response i hope for when i write! thank you for making my day!!!!!
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loooseygoosee on Chapter 12 Wed 28 Aug 2024 07:42PM UTC
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palehorse on Chapter 12 Wed 11 Sep 2024 08:33PM UTC
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