I've read all the comments&replies on this fic to figure out what you were referencing with that and found not only that but Dr. Knife Hands, I'm stealing that for future comment use LMAO Anyway, apt comparison, especially since she can't exactly *speak* and most of the signs (garage fight, I. Rex moment) was under high stress so it's easy to miss. I have a guess who the house guest would be and is currently wheezing at the thought. Looking forward to see how you'd spin this. Glad I can help you fix them, I always find stuff like those jarring and immersion breaking so it's nice to wipe the small stains off for the benefit of future readers. Cheers!
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xkcdjerry on Chapter 8 Thu 29 Aug 2024 11:07AM UTC
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