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  1. LuminousDog on Chapter 12 Wed 04 Sep 2024 03:20AM UTC

    Eating up these chapters as always, im in love. Great job!!!
    Concerning Alessia and Charles... Id say give em a bit more time/ use them as plot incipit kinda?
    Like, sorta as what happened with GP here: except it's alessia and Charles, and max and Joe are catching them. That then might be used to redirect the attention onto Joe and Max with a scene of that kind. I hope it's understandable, it's 5 am for me☠️☠️
    Love your work as always!

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 12 Wed 04 Sep 2024 02:39PM UTC

      Ooo yes it‘s deffo a good idea! I didn’t make Charles and Alessia a couple at that time because the age gap would be concerning LMAO, But I wanted to maybe sort of make them a couple in 2024 since that 3-4 year age gap isn’t too bad as adults you know. Anyway thanks for the praise lol!! <3 always love reading your comments

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