Comment on A New Kitten

  1. Hopefulbadger on Chapter 1 Sun 08 Sep 2024 11:11AM UTC

    I mean.. plenty of other people seem to be enjoying. This seems to be really a... a... You issue or something.

    Furthermore, I don't think you got very far. Like if your whole takeaway is just the Blake in the beginning is the sub and then ends up being in the top... You just didn't get far enough to actually make an educated assessment. Which like, is fine, but then don't be a little baby bitching about how you don't like it.

    Like... You do realize / know that literally all of her being taken in was an op. All intentionally designed to kidnap Weiss. Right?

    Furthermore, honey... I'm really sorry that your life is so bad that you need to be commenting here. But that isn't really constructive criticism. You just said I don't like it. Which I think is the reason why people say don't like don't read. Cuz like if you're going to give criticism... Make it constructive. It's not that hard. Like... I'm fully aware there's like a million flaws with my writing. I work to make them better, and to phase out those flaws. But I'm aware that I'm not perfect. You however seem to think that you're God and that everything must cater to you... I don't think that's healthy. please get that checked out.

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