Comment on Anne's Journey: Two eternal Souls And The Lost Daughter

  1. AleXXa_Writer on Chapter 1 Tue 24 Sep 2024 08:07PM UTC

    Dang it... More angst at the end, I can feel it. She became a vampire too, like her birth parents, and she'll have to go through this hell, at first not understanding why it's happening to her. I think a couple of new tears has already booked a room.

    P. S. Curse you, Remn-... I mean Solver.
    P. P. S. Solver = Remnant, change my mind

    Last Edited Tue 24 Sep 2024 08:08PM UTC

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    1. Devastat0r1775 on Chapter 1 Wed 25 Sep 2024 06:14PM UTC

      Uzi and V technically aren't 'vampires' anymore, since they're lacking the need to consume oil to prevent overheating and sunlight doesn't hurt them. Besides Immortality, they do have a whole different set of powers: enhanced strength & speed, virtually instantaneous healing, more sensitive senses and such. They're more like, shockingly, the immortals from the Underworld franchise. if you haven't seen any of those movies, I highly recommend them.

      Minor story spoilers alluding to events in future chapter. Read at own risk

      Anne is indeed developing her own powers, like Uzi and V's. The stress that Anne endured after learning the truth awakened them. She didn't have them in the past since, it's mentioned that Anne's clumsiness made her see the doctor a few times for repairs.

      Spoiler warning hidden within a hidden spoiler, omg

      However: Uzi and V had years - centuries - to get used to the powers and the instincts that come with them. Remember Uzi in E03 Cabin Fever? Something less massacre-y, but similar.

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      1. AleXXa_Writer on Chapter 1 Wed 25 Sep 2024 06:34PM UTC

        I still call them vampires, 'cause A) they still have wings and other powers, are immortal and have to blend in society, changing their IDs, and B) I like vampires 🖤 (not from The Twilight, they're horrible).
        Maybe I'll watch Underworld. I've just never heard of it.
        I'm not gonna answer the spoiler parts 'cuz maybe someone doesn't wanna see them. I'll just say that I think she'll experience at least a few more mental breakdowns, the most serious ones. If angst moments will be well-written, I'll experience mental breakdown myself again (both in good and bad way, 'cuz once again I'll ensure myself that fans write BETTER stories about this series than Liam himself).
        'm gonna wait for new chapters. Thx for it! ✌️

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        1. Devastat0r1775 on Chapter 1 Wed 25 Sep 2024 06:41PM UTC

          Oh, I did forget to add something: Uzi doesn't have her wings anymore, too. I wrote the original Immortal Vuzi oneshot before the final episode aired and I assumed that Uzi was going to lose her powers. Hence, V is the only one with wings.
          Anyways, thx for the comments.

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          1. AleXXa_Writer on Chapter 1 Sat 12 Oct 2024 11:39PM UTC

            Well, I've finally watched the 1st "Underworld" movie and... Well, it's... passable. I wouldn't say I didn't like it at all but I doubt I'm gonna watch all of the sequels or rewatch the 1st one. This action movie is so typical within the other movies of this genre that I got bored in a couple of moments. Just not a fan of this genre, that's all. 5/10

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            1. Devastat0r1775 on Chapter 1 Mon 14 Oct 2024 06:04PM UTC

              Fair enough. I guess I just have a nostalgic filter about them, since I grew up with those movies, especially the first three.

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