The internal little squeal I did when Sunday pulled out the scythe! That's such a fittinf weapon I don't even know where to begin. I absolutely love the connotations of death that come with it - in his full halo and wing form it would look absolutely stunning.
(I loved the part where the other three fangirled over his weapon. Yes, Dan Heng, I'm looking at you too).
Jing Yuan having what I've now dubbed the 'trauma sensor' makes so much sense to me - first of all I bet he's always on the lookout for signs of strife that might turn into mara. And the way Sunday reacted to it all - you perfectly describe his revulsion and guilt from forgoing the order. I love it.
Thank you so so much for the chapter (I'm in love with your style of writing) and good day!
wowow thank you sm for your comment! im so happy the scythe is a hit ghsjfhljsfdr and yes poor jy cant ever relax hes always got one eye open for the mara, tysm for your kind words!!!
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