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  1. A_n_d12 on Chapter 1 Fri 11 Oct 2024 01:52AM UTC

    This fic is so good! It had everything I was looking for and more! I love your interpretation of an aftermath of Frontiers and I feel like the characters are so well written! Your writing style is so amazing and interesting to read! Please keep writing I need more of your works and I seriously need a part 2! Does Sonic talk to Shadow? How will the conversation go? Is there other things that Sonic forgot? Does he get his memories back? If you decide to continue this I will support you 100% because this story and concept is so good!

    Sorry I just wrote a giant paragraph I just really enjoyed reading this :)

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    1. EmmaSmoke on Chapter 1 Fri 11 Oct 2024 08:04PM UTC

      Thank you! I love Frontiers so much. The entire concept of it really hits that sweet spot of angst potential in my brain. Also, I genuinely think it’s gorgeous, forget about gameplay.

      My writing style and I have been pals for years, so I know it appreciates the compliment ;)

      I am going to keep writing, dw! There’s more potential with Frontiers, and no matter how average the execution of Forces was, there’s a lot of potential there, too (I mean, a war with child soldiers? Sonic presumed dead? Actually locked up with a villain with illusion powers? The angst writes itself, man)

      I lowkey forgot that I should probably have them have the conversation. I didn’t realize until I was rereading this that there wasn’t dialogue, oops. But yeah, a part two with the conversation should be fine. I hope I can continue with the good characterizations. I think I have their personalities and physical mannerisms down to a sufficient extent, but I’m a tad nervous writing them talking because I want it to be believable, you know? It’ll be a serious moment so I need to find the right amount of Sonic jokes. Shadow, too, might be a bit tricky, but I understand his type of character, at least, so… Oof, now I’m the one rambling haha

      Don’t worry about the long comment! I love all my comments, especially the long ones. It helps me figure out what part of my stories people like or gives me the confidence to keep going :D

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