Sorry, I know this chapter is all somber and grim, but I just really like this take on an alternate ending. It’s in character, sweet in a way, sad, and this is creative and well-written. I love the way you write emotion and Donnie’s thoughts especially. Even the way you write dialogue. Kudos. You earned a sub too.
Can I also say I adore the subtle dynamic you’ve established with Elizabeth and Donnie. I thought the ending was really sweet when he accepted his death and kissed her forehead before he left. Reminds me of my brother and I and I’m definitely a sucker for siblings that are written right and not constantly fighting. It’s just petty or good-natured bickering and nothing more.
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