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  1. TiranaSorki on Chapter 1 Wed 13 Nov 2024 12:39AM UTC

    “How could they not have been waiting for her, too? She’s wanted nothing more than to come back – has everyone forgotten all about her?” ow :(
    Poor Loki getting stabbed D:
    “That is fair. Still. Weak.” =,= that reminds me of Mantis yelling at nebula that all she cares about is smth like usefulness and competence
    “This is her room. It’s her room, but it’s his now, and Odin must’ve given it to him to erase all memories of her.” :(
    “Apologies if my book collection offended you,” Loki grunts, “Oh, was it the dust? I haven’t been here for some years.” XDXD
    “Hurry up,” Hela snaps, “You’re bleeding on my mattress.” W____W older sister love
    “She remembers a time from a lifetime ago that she wanted one, just because it often felt so lonely as an only child.” I can totally imagine that being true ;~;
    “I wonder of Odin’s fate,” Loki says, “That such monsters are his heirs.” Owww don’t call yerself a monster, Loki D:
    “Oh, good riddance,” Hela grumbles, “She was so annoying; Odin –” not a good reaction, Hela O__O
    “Maybe Loki is a little bit more of her child than she thought.” Well that’s a good point O_O
    “Perhaps next time, I should pour water over your head,” Loki supplies, “It seems far less lethal.” xD
    Love how they both don’t wanna be alone so they’re starting to veryyyy slowly bond. Their conversation about ruling was perfect <3 and the way Hela can tell it’s not exactly ruling that Loki wants
    Hela having no idea how to deal with a nightmare ;~; xD not funny but kinda funny but also touching <3 Love the little detail of how Fenris used to be with her when she had ones
    “Their deal is strategic only.” Keep telling yourself that… :)
    (She won’t let anyone do the same to Loki.) (Not Odin. Not Thanos. Not Thor when they find him.) <3
    “But still, when her breath shudders, Loki’s hand tightens over hers. She thought he was sleeping. It’s almost relieving that he’s not.” <3<3<3 help I adore them
    I think the ending was perfect :D this was amazing :D:D:D
    PS: those title options XDXD

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    1. RivanaRita on Chapter 1 Sun 17 Nov 2024 10:11PM UTC

      They both need hugs ;~;
      'that reminds me of Mantis yelling at nebula that all she cares about is smth like usefulness and competence' ROTFL Fair point xD
      Hela is the prime example of sisterly love, what can be said? :')
      I 100% think Hela wanted a sibling when she was little T_T
      Both. Loki and Hela. NEED HELP.
      'Their conversation about ruling was perfect'<3<3 I'm so glad! I tried to get it down in just the right tones, and it was pretty tricky, but I think I at least semi-managed
      :') She's trying her best xD
      I wonder how long it'll be before Hela finally just accepts that she actually cares about people ;~; Well, she's making progress, at least!! =D
      THANKS!!! =D=D=D=D

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      1. TiranaSorki on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Nov 2024 09:47PM UTC

        "Hela is the prime example of sisterly love, what can be said? :')" yeah :-; xDXD
        yeah :(
        I think it was perfect :D
        XD
        Yeah :D
        ^-^

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        1. RivanaRita on Chapter 1 Thu 21 Nov 2024 11:39PM UTC

          Thanks again <3<3<3

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