It's relieving to know, you think it's realistic and yes Chris (and everyone else Leon's close to) being involved in the intervention, definitely puts him on the spot. It's not an issue he gets to hide anymore and therefore has to be honest to the people around him, as well as himself. Knowing himself, he definitely has enough reason to worry about relapsing.
We'll see how that plays out <-< but yes, Leon's got anxiety he doesn't know how to handle.
it is ^^" but thank you a lot <3 if there's one thing I'm insecure about in my writing it's definitely the dialogues. lol
Awww thank you!! T^T that means a lot! tbh I never stopped writing ^^" I like to have a story finished before starting to post, and since this project just grew longer and longer it took me 8 to 9 months to have everything written and proofread. >-<
Yeah, it’s nice to know that his alcohol issues are out in the open and that Chris and Hunnigan are fully aware of it because we all if that wasn’t the case, Leon would be going to great lengths to keep that knowledge under wraps, even at the detriment for his own health and whatever situation him or anyone else would be in.
Dialogue is usually something I enjoy when writing but I go thru so many iterations of it until I feel it’s just right but I really am enjoying your dialogue here and feel it’s very in line with the characters and feels natural.
I’m so envious of that honestly. I wish I could sit down and write the entire thing out before posting but the closest I get is an rough outline of all the chapters and then take it one by one (which may explain why I then sometimes go long distances between posting because I get hit with writers block and the fear of readers ire when I can’t post an update in a timely manner). May attempt to try that with the honeypot sequel and see if I can overcome my rampant need to post immediately. 😂
Thank you again, I hope it stays that way, even when the dialogue becomes a bit more complicated. I envy you being able to go through several drafts, I just agonize over the same few lines until I have something sorta figured out. ^^"
Totally understand you there, you don't know the amount of times I just wanted to publish the first chapter to feel a little more motivated. T-T I'm just too scared to leave a fic unfinished, because my motivation/ hyperfixation might die halfway through, so I never post anything that isn't 100% done. I think you're also way faster with writing than I am, so I can see why my methods might not work for you but if you want to, it's definitely worth a try! ^^ I really hope you don't get any weird comments rushing you to finish your fics .-. we're all here for fun and I'd rather have an unfinished fic than a burned out author. <3
Oh I definitely also agonize over the same few lines as well, so I’m not immune to that either lol. Dialogue is just plain tricky sometimes. It either comes to me naturally or I have to force it and then repeat the scenario over and over until it feel right. It can drive a person mad. 😂
I think the most I’ve been able to pre-write before posting was probably 2-3 chapters but my brain is a fickle one and thinks that I can’t move onto the next chapter until the one prior to it is finished and posted lol. I’ve gotten better over time but it’s a struggle. Though, I can definitely relate to the fear of losing interest and/or the hyperfixation and then abandoning it. I’m going to try to attempt the method and see. It couldn’t hurt. ❤️
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