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1. SpineLessTree7 on Chapter 3 Sat 16 Nov 2024 02:53AM UTC

   

   i did mention this was my first time writting, so i would appriciate it if you point out any problems so i can fix it.

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2. 1. N0cturnalzz on Chapter 3 Thu 21 Nov 2024 04:46PM UTC

      

      He seems kinda like a self insert currently, maybe go more in depth with his character. You're doing great!

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