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1. Zeldawritesfanfics on Chapter 1 Sat 07 Dec 2024 05:04AM UTC

   

   This is a nice story! I think it's really fun! The only thing I would work on is the tenses of your words. It becomes present and past tense quite infrequently, so maybe try sticking to one. Otherwise, this was great!

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2. 1. Takeshiozo on Chapter 1 Sat 07 Dec 2024 07:42AM UTC

      

      Oh sorry, English is not my first language so sometime I have to use a translator to help me write, so it's probably why tense is all over the place.

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   2. 1. Zeldawritesfanfics on Chapter 1 Sat 07 Dec 2024 05:35PM UTC

         

         Woah, really? That's cool! I had no idea!

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