Personally, I’m just blaming the Solver for everything. After all, it got curious as to why Neo liked V and decided to “play” with her and find what makes her tick.
I feel like wanting to kill the Disassembly Drone who comes off as a total oil-thirsty, ax-crazy psychopath at first glance can be *somewhat* justified. Uzi knows nothing about V except for what she’s been told, and it’s the same scene that N tells her in the show.
It is, don’t get me wrong. It’s just that C thinks Uzi is a DD, so she doesn’t think twice about talking about V’s brutality.
It’s kinda like being undercover and the person you’re talking to starts telling you about how their friend is a serial killer. Like, “Okay…..no, thank you.”
Maybe have J with tears in her eyes or not up to you threatening to kill Uzi constantly with rage cause J seemed more attached to V here than Canon from how you written it.
I think it’s just ‘cause I like when the team feels like an actual team, and you can tell with my writing. Since everyone’s closer here, it would make more sense that J is pissed at Uzi, and C’s just kinda shocked.
I think J’s lack of redemption comes from her willingly siding with the drone who killed her best friend and refusing to listen to the one person who tries to help her.
Here, I just write J to be a bit friendlier and that’s it; I don’t force my readers to like her because there’s no fun in it.
J gave some good points to why she sided with Cyn during the final battle but people ignore that and also Cyn being J's admin but many people think differently cause it wasn't explored really so its up to headcannons and fans to decide how it happened.
I kinda like the fact that she remained a villain, but I do wish we got to see her and N and V acting as a team before than. It would have hurt so much more. :)
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