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  1. MadameGemKnight on Chapter 43 Wed 18 Dec 2024 06:05AM UTC

    Apologies in advance for the ABSOLUTE FLOOD of comments I am about to leave on this fic, oh my gosh - these past few months have been crazy and only now thanks to the power of the holiday break have I been able to properly sit down and leave the proper comments every single chapter of this fic deserves. My deepest apologies for it taking so long to properly comment on some of these chapters, please know that even when I haven't been able to comment I have been able to read and greatly enjoy each chapter (usually in-between 50 million assignments :P)
    Proper Comment Number One must of course be that I aM SECONDING YOUR THROWING OF PHORJAY DOWN THE STAIRS AUGHHHHHHHHH. It truly is unnerving watching him slowly ease into a parental role more and more, especially since he ABSOLUTELY DOES NOT DESERVE TO BE IN THAT ROLE. Stampy honey you deserve better than someone who doesn't get your dislike of salad (which is an absolute mood btw, I only started actually liking salads in the past two or so years and I still have issues with them for the same reasons Stampy does)!!!!!
    The imagery in this chapter is gorgeous as well, holy moly...the descriptions of Phorjay's house and Azuet were absolutely lovely. I especially adored "massive fungi with pulsing teal vines climbing up their stems grew to the ceiling, their caps of cyan imposing a tunnel upon the light of shroomlight beaming below," it paints such a vivid picture :0

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    1. Madisongs on Chapter 43 Wed 18 Dec 2024 03:11PM UTC

      PFP by euanbealcho

      I still need to build that house in Minecraft lol. Exclusive author’s insight: I cannot picture the exterior because of how wacky the interior is. I think I accidentally used two separate reference images for the same room 😅 and there’s a wacky ass staircase leading to a wacky ass hallway too. I’ll sketch out some layouts and such and send them later so The Vision is clear.

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