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  1. BlackTint Sat 21 Dec 2024 09:33PM UTC

    Marvelous work, the angst hit the right spots, especially with Miyabi hasn't confessed as well.

    (Just an idea for you)

    Would really love to see an epilogue of her being a shell of her former self as memories flood through her of their moments together. Going back and forth with scenes from the past and back to the present blending into one another with actions she's doing in the present that triggers past memories and also some like what if scenarios that she thinks about and regrets not taking it in the past. In short just her mourning and regretting.

    I have a soft spot for angst that sometimes make me think. Am I a masochist that derives pleasure from these types of stories.

    Last Edited Sat 21 Dec 2024 09:33PM UTC

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    1. Istharoth Sun 22 Dec 2024 12:06AM UTC

      I'm so glad you noticed she hadnt confessed yet!!

      Ahhhh that's such a good idea !!! Maybe it is masochism that drives me to write angst ;-;

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