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  1. That definitely could've gone more smoothly, but it also could've gone a whole lot worse, so I'll consider it a win! There's so much subtext Omega is missing here which would explain Cal's behavior, but that will come with time and trust. I'm a little surprised that he told Omega he was a rebel so readily, but it seems that Cal still finds something trustworthy about Omega despite her being a clone.

    Omega's crush is so adorable! I've never really experienced anything like that myself, and I've never wanted to, but it's still really sweet and cute to read about. She deserves this chance to act like a kid her age for once. They both do. And now Omega has snuck her way into something of a little date, which will be interesting. Could've been delivered more smoothly, but at least Cal said yes! Still really enjoying this fic, and I can't wait to see how things go when Omega eventually finds out about Cal being a Jedi!

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    1. Yes, the teenagers have had a nice conversation and done something fun together, so it’s definitely a win for them both! And yeah, there’s a lot Omega doesn’t know, she’s curious and a little concerned but right now she’s just thinking something happened that bothered him while they weren’t together. Cal definitely doesn’t trust her nearly enough to be honest with her yet- that will change in time! And I think he was comfortable with her knowing he was a rebel because he could tell she’s just an innocent girl who wouldn’t do anything to hurt him with that info.

      I am happy you think her crush is cute! Crushes aren’t for everyone and that’s okay, but I’m happy that you’re enjoying this even though it’s not your cup of tea irl. And yes, they both SO deserve a chance to just be kids! They’ve both had that stolen away from them in the past, though the Batch has done well with trying to provide Omega with some fun and calm times. And yes, clever Omega got herself a date! It was definitely not smooth…nothing about the two of them is smooth right now 😂. But hey, she shot her shot and is going out with her crush, love that for her!

      Thank you for your kind words! It’s going to be a while before the Jedi reveal, but we’re slowly working towards it! If life doesn’t throw me a curve ball, chapter 3 should be coming out in about a week or so!

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