Really love your version of the scarecrow here. Like how he says early on that he use to have a name and a brain, but not anymore. And how Dorothy notices how his position can look either friendly, or horrifying. Either a welcome, or a crucifixion. Like an acknowledgment that as beautiful as this new place looks, there is a danger underneath if you aren’t careful. Well done.
🤫 You’re onto something here, and I’m happy to say, I’m glad that people are picking up on it!
WtO has two stories that are happening here, one in the foreground and one in the background. I’m so glad that my efforts to have these two stories intermingle are not in vein!
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Tera_Earth on Chapter 4 Tue 14 Jan 2025 12:13AM UTC
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