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  1. Bluebirds19 on Chapter 3 Mon 20 Jan 2025 06:57AM UTC

    Now it’s time for an Emotional breakdown! “I still love my wife even after all these years apart, I’m changed but my love for you is a constant ” penelope and odysseus style…

    We soo need to see stunticons vs Darkwing ( darkwing gets jumped by 4/5 bots)

    Breakdown: you have a cog now!

    Dragstip: get it in the great cogging after Our leaders retreat?

    Bee:oh this old thing it was a cog of the prime Micronus, me Optimus, elita and De- I mean megatron had them gifted to us by alpha Trion.

    The stuntcons: …..

    Breakdown:

    Bee: want to see my integrated weaponry, I’ve got a blaster, I can duel wield energy knifes and ohhh I just discovered this look!! A shield! Now I can protect you like you used to protect me.

    Breakdown verge of tears: I did a scrappy job protecting you tbh b.

    Last Edited Mon 20 Jan 2025 07:06AM UTC

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    1. Bluebirds19 on Chapter 3 Mon 20 Jan 2025 07:16AM UTC

      Megatron walks in on 5 bots kicking the aft of his old abusive manager.

      Dead end: Lord Megatron… it’s not what it looks like?

      Megatron: oh don’t mind me continue.

      The stunticons: uhh

      Darkwing: *sounds of lots of pain and groaning*

      Megatron drinking a cube: please continue… I insist.

      Breakdown: You heard the Mech, That’s an order! *kicks Darkwing in his stupid face*

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      1. razorbee14 on Chapter 3 Mon 20 Jan 2025 05:22PM UTC

        this is a good idea actually

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        1. Bluebirds19 on Chapter 3 Mon 20 Jan 2025 05:40PM UTC

          Feel absolutely free to use this idea! I love this fic! :3

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          1. razorbee14 on Chapter 3 Mon 20 Jan 2025 05:42PM UTC

            I already have the next 9 chapters planned but if I can fit it somewhere in between them I absolutely will use this, it's hilarious

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            1. ES_BumbleBee on Chapter 3 Tue 21 Jan 2025 10:03PM UTC

              damn

              you're a busy-bee

              Last Edited Tue 21 Jan 2025 10:03PM UTC

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