Wonderful story! I also feel like Ise should have gotten a fight in the Fake Karakura Town Arc. She doesn't really seem all that present until TYBW where we see her backstory.
I like how you used the history of the Shinigami to define why she uses Kido and Hado in exchange for not having a released Zanpakuto. For some reason, I always found the most proficient users of spells in Bleach to be the most dangerous. The only thing more dangerous is people who just fight hand to hand without either (Looking at you Yamamoto, flexing on Wonderweiss)
I also love the original Espada in the story. His abilities reminded me of Baishin from The Sealed Soul Frenzy OVA. His attitude, and even the way he thiks about joining the Shinigami in his death, reminds me a bit of Grimmjow too.
"She doesn't really seem all that present until TYBW where we see her backstory." Yes it was a bit of shame and that's why we're here.
"I like how you used the history of the Shinigami to define why she uses Kido and Hado in exchange for not having a released Zanpakuto." I try to incorporate some existing rules/traditions into my fics so they would feel canon compliant.
"I also love the original Espada in the story." I tried to create a character that would contrast Nanao and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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