I've just finished p5r and i loved how they depicted yusuke's struggles as an artist after the whole madarame thing in his social link but you absolutely nailed his psyche during his stay at madarame's, i cannot express in words how much is loved this piece of writing: the complex feelings, the descriptions, the pieces of dialogue You absolutely nailed yusuke's character!!!! I also love how you wrote akira, i can imagine it can be hard to write the personality of a somewhat self insert character but you portrayed him so well! I also love his and akira's interactions as well, so sweet and gentle! This will be a fic i will be rereading thank you so much for writing this!! 🙏🙏🙏🙏
Oh no, Im so horrendously late to this, I apologize :(( I cannot describe how happy it makes me to hear that I characterized both of them well, especially from someone who just finished the game. I always worry about my idea of a character being off. I find both of them so interesting and loved getting to write something that explored what Yusuke went through in more depth, because I truly don't know that it’s examined enough.
Thank you so much for reading, and thank you for your kind words. Have a lovely day :)
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