This fic is absolutely glorious so far and I can’t wait to see how the situation devlops. I’m always a sucker for Mark and Helly making out in the Eagan bed. And I love how well you’ve captured Helly’s dialogue as she catches Mark up to speed. And when she whispers “is it you…” heartbreaking. But intriguing.
Oh wow, this is so kind, thank you for reading! (Truly it's my dream to capture dialogue and style well, especially Helly, my fave. Thank you thank you.) And I had to break her heart, just a little.
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Bonymaloney on Chapter 2 Tue 04 Mar 2025 08:34PM UTC
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