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  1. NightDK on Chapter 14 Thu 20 Mar 2025 02:21AM UTC

    In a story wise persective this was expected. But this was a bold move, i saw very few authors who killed off their own protagonist, in such a permanent way, for the progression of the plot. I am impressed and i say that the storytelling here has been terrific! a great work trully.

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    1. MarkofArtemis on Chapter 14 Sat 22 Mar 2025 02:03AM UTC

      Glad you are enjoying it! I got allllloooot of hate on Space battles for this chapter haha

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      1. NightDK on Chapter 14 Sat 22 Mar 2025 01:50PM UTC

        I can imagine, it is not going to be popular to people who are acustomed to seeing the normal, powertrippy/happy ending, fanfiction and are not acustomed to reading more professional writing in a sense.

        But still i expected people in Space Battles to be a bit more mature than that hahaha! not all stories have a happy ending, some are sad, and i was sad and frustrated too but that was the idea! and it was very well done and while i was frustrated for tanya i was never frustrated with the story itself. very very well done. but ok it is to be expected that it would be not well recieved, even if the storytelling was very good.

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        1. MarkofArtemis on Chapter 14 Wed 03 Sep 2025 05:11PM UTC

          With arc 2 underway, im hoping to keep the story telling going :) arc 1 if for sure going to stick into peoples minds for the rest of the story though

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