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  1. [“Took Gaara for a walk. He’s not been sleeping well since the . . . since the people tried to get him.” Temari could hear the unspoken ‘again’ that they both tried to avoid saying.]
    Uhh, so this wasn't the first time Rasa organized an assassination attempt on Gaara? And Temari and Kankuro didn't change their view on Rasa permanently after that?

    [She kept her shuddering breathing under control, tried to slow her hammering heart, and just hoped that Gaara was okay. Several days later, Temari kicked her sandals off at the door, wiping a hand across her brow as she entered the house.]
    So did they confront Rasa about it? Did they check on Gaara? I feel like you don't explain the result of traumatic events and just skip to other things.

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