I'm enjoying your story, the multiple issues Severus is dealing with make the story feel realistic since most people have more than one problem at the same time. I like a clueless Severus, that's a unique way to portray him. Clueless as in not having all the answers by the end of the chapter. I alsoam wondering when Severus will realize his mistake with the flowers. Even still, good is coming from his mistake.
I'm glad you like my story! And I'm glad it doesn't feel like I have too many things going on at once - I was a bit worried it was too much. I was also trying to balance Severus coming up with good solutions to all these problems he's discovered with not being omniscient and all-wise - I'm happy that I didn't slip too far in the latter direction, a lot of fics seem to think that he's compotent in everything despite being relatively young (and having no people skills).
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