Comment on The Art of Letting Go

  1. Redemmo (Guest) on Chapter 5 Sat 19 Apr 2025 11:22PM UTC

    This was a beautiful little story. I think we all wanted a better end for Romeo once we knew his story. I like that you gave him a personality in your story.

    The concept of P as his own character is an interesting one. I like both interpretations - he is Carlo, or he is P]. I'd also like to play around with the idea of P gradually becoming comfortable with being Carlo - starting out with having memories that don't quite feel real but gradually growing and learning how the memories make him who he is. Lots of iterations that can be played around with.

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