Comment on Rally Rewind

  1. Sai_xxb (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 21 Apr 2025 08:02AM UTC

    I've never seen this premise for a time travel fic before tbh so i'm pretty interested so far.looking forward to seeing how the story goes.Idk if you would appreciate the advice but I think you should break longer paragraphs into ones a bit smaller ( sorry If my opinion wasn't wanted😭😭)

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