Comment on Cult of the Lamb: Caretakers

  1. Artist_of_fantasy on Chapter 6 Tue 22 Apr 2025 08:26PM UTC

    This is very well written I only noticed two mistakes in the whole thing
    (The part where they say they thought kall the and doesn't have a d)
    And the part where they tie you to their body with silk you mixed up the fornt and back unless I'm just reading it poorly which isn't unlikely)
    Very good keep it up from one writer to another

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    1. Sw124 on Chapter 6 Tue 22 Apr 2025 09:02PM UTC

      I tend to make many mistakes and try to fix them when I can, but I’m glad you like it I’m working on a more agnst based caretaker story

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      1. Artist_of_fantasy on Chapter 6 Thu 24 Apr 2025 12:24AM UTC

        Understandable I was making sure you know about it so if you want you can fix it after all I came here for the story not grammer

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