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1. ViaDolorsa2020 on Chapter 3 Wed 18 Jan 2017 11:40PM UTC

   

   Hi, so I just spotted a mistake in your writing. Its not very big, rather small as matter of fact. However, I tend to correct mistakes in my head, but not everyone can do that. And if and when I write, I am horrible at catching my own mistakes. That being said here is the line that the mistake is in: "A string of webbing shot out and attached itself to a bag of potato *ships* across the kitchen. Peter tugged, and the bag flew to his hand. He opened it and started snacking."
   If I am not mistaken, I think you mean chips.
   Just thought I would let you know.

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2. 1. TunaFishChris on Chapter 3 Wed 18 Jan 2017 11:49PM UTC

      

      D'oh!
      Thank you!

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   2. 1. ViaDolorsa2020 on Chapter 3 Thu 19 Jan 2017 02:46AM UTC

         

         Of course. I am Happy to help. :)

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