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1. pennflinn on Chapter 3 Tue 06 May 2025 03:04PM UTC

   

   What a wonderful showcase of your talent! The descriptions here are so LOVELY and VIVID. The way you weave light and color and music and feeling in such a short snippet is masterfully done.

   "Maybe he’ll sink instead, into a cloud of light and life, streams of light dancing around him." I paricularly loved this line! How evocative!

   Thanks for sharing!

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2. 1. BreakfastTea on Chapter 3 Tue 06 May 2025 03:49PM UTC

      

      😊😊😊Thank you!!! You're so kind!

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