Comment on 【Re:Oboreru】〜 Even if I drown, I will keep moving forward 〜

  1. 12GC12 on Chapter 4 Sun 25 May 2025 02:38PM UTC

    Again, and i am not very proud of this in first olace by saying it.

    But a good part of the first fic was subaru attoning for not having ram consent in first place. You jist removed quite a good reason as to why subaru felt like shit and attemped to atone in the rest of the fic vy that.

    I readed the spanish version when it came out. And that scene waant pleasant to reas at all. Here is far too toned down compared to the original.

    Last Edited Sun 25 May 2025 02:39PM UTC

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    1. Lux_redo on Chapter 4 Sun 25 May 2025 04:21PM UTC

      I think you are right. Right now, I am using a translation app, and after reading your comment, I decided to analyze it more closely, noticing that the translation app uses AI. I believe that means it tries to summarize or something similar. However, in the next chapter, I will review it more thoroughly to eliminate these errors and improve it, making sure it is more faithful to the original. Please accept my apologies if I made a mistake; this is my first translated story, which makes me a bit clumsy. Sorry again.

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      1. 12GC12 on Chapter 4 Mon 26 May 2025 03:40PM UTC

        Mate that AI aint just translating. Its rewriting the fic.

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