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  1. Khornenatter on Chapter 25 Tue 10 Jun 2025 11:05AM UTC

    I think you're handling the big cast well! You flesh out their personalities and struggles and even when you're focusing a scene on two characters, you pepper in mentions of the other characters shaping the environment and narrative

    Also: poor Daegred, things are not going as planned. Instead of a teacher he's not only there as a student but has become his team's Dad as well! I mean, his current goal is successfully establishing bed time (and making sure Sun is dressed). I feel a bit bad for Mercury, Tactical Assault Daegred would not be my sleeping aid of choice either

    All that being said, I'm thoroughly hooked and can't wait for more! (No pressure though, the chapters come when they come. I'll do re-reads in the meantime)

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    1. AliceArkham on Chapter 25 Tue 10 Jun 2025 11:45PM UTC

      Thank you so much for your kind words, I really appreciate it when readers leave a comment (which is not an offer of commission).

      Despite his youthful appearance, Maedhros is still a perfectly functioning adult (mostly), so it's only natural that he takes things more seriously than a lot of teenagers.

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