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  1. Opal223 on Chapter 2 Thu 12 Jun 2025 09:38PM UTC

    I like how you handled emphasizing the difference in languages, it's quite clever. 😁

    Poor Link! He's got to be so confused, although I'm certain Halan is, too. Miss Halan is into the hero already! Lol. I'll have to see where that leads! I like the comedic tone that you've set with Halan with her taking pictures of Link and fawning over him. It's very entertaining! She is definitely a troublemaker, and cunning to boot! They'll have to keep an eye on her. Lol.

    This was a great chapter! Looking forward to reading more! ~Opal

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    1. Sugarrosemuggy on Chapter 2 Thu 12 Jun 2025 10:07PM UTC

      Thank you so much, yes Halan is more of the bold type, so she doesn’t hesitate to show her attraction to Link even if their courtship culture is different.

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      1. Opal223 on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 02:27AM UTC

        Yes, indeed. Lol. Looking forward to reading more!

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        1. Sugarrosemuggy on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 02:41AM UTC

          Glad you’re enjoying this story.

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          1. Opal223 on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 03:03AM UTC

            You're doing a great job. 😁

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            1. Sugarrosemuggy on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 03:15AM UTC

              Thank you, that warms my heart to hear? (Read?)

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              1. Opal223 on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 03:19AM UTC

                Either one is good. 😁 Keep up the awesome work!

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                1. Sugarrosemuggy on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 03:26AM UTC

                  Thanks, currently more on the x-men fic I just started to write, currently in the middle of the first chapter. But, I’ll probably switch to this afterwards.

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                  1. Opal223 on Chapter 2 Fri 13 Jun 2025 04:36AM UTC

                    Nice. 😁

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