Jon is one of my favorite GOT characters, Tyrion being another. With both of them fiddling around Im sure to be very please. The story is pretty good so far and I am curious how things are going to go, especially how the Wall will survive without Jon on it in the future. One piece of advice: Jon, from what Ive seen in the show, is quite prone to silence and brooding. Im sure this likely means he has a lot going on in his head. Because of that, I think it'd be quite good if you added more of his internal thoughts and what not. Since his dreams seem to be coming true, perhaps more of what he thinks he'll do to prevent it? Regardless, good story so far. I like how Ned is trying to care for Jon even with Cat's disapproval. Looking forward to an update!
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CapriSweet on Chapter 10 Thu 02 Feb 2017 05:56AM UTC
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