Comment on Reacting to a Date in the Capital

  1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Tue 17 Jun 2025 12:25AM UTC

    If it weren't for Subaru, two of the three Royal Candidates would have already died right under Reinhard's nose!

    Two of the five Royal Candidates

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    1. Satella-being-sus-again (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 18 Jun 2025 09:38PM UTC

      Incorrect. All 5 Candidate, all 5 Sages, an unknown number of Nobles and the entirety of the Capital civilians and garrison would have died on Subaru’s first day if he hadn’t prevented Emilia’s death. Since on that day all the Candites were walking around within 2 streets of each other. I cannot recall where exactly I learnt this, the Emilia pov of Subaru’s first life perhaps. Regardless FK Puck!

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      1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Thu 19 Jun 2025 05:36AM UTC

        Süs

        I hadn't thought so far, sorry but thank you for telling me

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        1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sat 12 Jul 2025 06:55AM UTC

          Rem: Emilia sama ¿de verdad crees que Subaru kun es el tipo de hombre que solo se deja llevar por la apariencia? Reducir los sentimientos de mi héroe a solo las apariencia es un insulto para el
          Emilia: pero Rem, Subaru solo se enamoro subconscientemente de mi porque me parezco a su esposa
          Rem abofereo a Emilia
          Rem: ¡si en verdad piensas eso entonces no te mereces a Subaru ! ¿Acoso no viste las visualiciones con nosotros? Subaru se enamoro de ti porque fuiste la primera en ayusarlo cuando llegó a Lugunica, el se enamoro de tu amabilidad por ayudar a un extraño sin pedir nada a cambio, asi que secir quw Subaru kun solo te amaba por Satella es pisotear sus sentimientos, Subaru no es tan superficial solo para llevarse por las apariencias

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          1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sat 12 Jul 2025 04:15PM UTC

            Süs

            Thank you, im glad I don't have to do this alone.

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    3. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sun 22 Jun 2025 02:05PM UTC

      Süs

      Hi Ki are you busy or something?

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      1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sun 22 Jun 2025 10:14PM UTC

        I'm free and I'm reading the chapter.

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      2. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 05:11PM UTC

        In the part where Julius talks about how he doesn't understand why it's not mentioned that Satella was the first blue in the history books, I would have Tibey theorize that after the calamity several books were destroyed either by the witch's chaos or by people who wanted to hide Satella's past so that she would only be remembered as someone evil.

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      3. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 05:20PM UTC

        When Anastasia finds out that Satella can create doors, she'd put something like this:
        Anastasia in her thoughts
        Anastasia: I could ask the witch to make me an artificial door, but what can I offer her in return? I doubt she's interested in money, and freeing her from the seal would be a mistake. - Then she comes up with an idea. - What if I offer them a paid date at one of the fancy restaurants? Satella hasn't eaten anything in 400 years other than those apples. She'd be delighted to try something else, accompanied by her beloved. I can even offer them a table with a good view of the stars.

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        1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 05:28PM UTC

          Süs

          Both ideas that you had sounded absolutely amazing, im definitely implement them, but why would Anastasia think it would be a mistake to free her from the Seal? Remember they all think she can easily ignore the seal at will if she wanted, furthermore I have to ask how would you have them react to the end of the Chapter,

          Please answer soon, thank you.

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          1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 05:58PM UTC

            I thought they only had the theory that he can ignore the seal and not the certainty.
            I also think there should have been a reaction when Alec said that Satella saved his life.
            It makes sense that they focused more on Subaru helping create Alec's inventions, but it's strange that no one mentioned that Satella saved Alec's life.
            Crusch also lacked a reaction to Volcanica's appearance. She hates him, so I expected at least an annoyed look or her reproaching him for not saving the royal family if they had a contract with the king.

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          2. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 06:07PM UTC

            As for the ending, I'd say a reaction from Wilhelm would be appropriate. He lost Theresia and his family was ruined because of Pandora, so he would be the angriest with the witch. Wilhelm: How dare that damn witch do that to Subaru-dono's family? Wilhelm, who saw Subaru as his grandson and was beginning to accept the idea of ​​having Satella as a granddaughter, could only watch in horror and helplessness. The old swordsman couldn't bear to see those who would be his great-grandchildren disappear into thin air. Felt's reaction could also follow. Felt clenched his fists in anger. Felt: Reinhard, do you think I could kill that witch? Reinhard: I promise you, Felt-sama, that I will find a way to kill that witch. I won't let that witch ruin another life.
            There would also be Garfiel's screams of fury at what that witch did to his capital.
            And even Emilia and Rem, who detest Satella, would react with contempt for what the witch did to Subaru's children.

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            1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 06:48PM UTC

              Süs

              Sounds about right, im going to use the reaction you said as the beginning of the Next Chapter, which will probably come much later as i plan on also starting to Write something else and also it will probably be the final chapter of this story, but I added some of the idea's you said to the Chapter, so can you once again overlook it and tell me if you would still want to add something else, and than tell me again please, oh! And by the way, do you realize what happened to Subaru's and Satella's kids?

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            3. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Wed 09 Jul 2025 01:06PM UTC

              Süs

              Hey Ki I just continued writing please look and do your thing please 🙏.

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              1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Thu 10 Jul 2025 12:20AM UTC

                That revelation shocked the entire theater.
                Even Priscilla stared at the screen, unable to believe what she was seeing as she dropped her fan.
                Al seemed to want to disappear as everyone's gaze turned to him.
                Priscilla: Aldebaran, explain now. What's the meaning of this?
                Al remained silent, not knowing what to say.
                Ricardo: So Al is a clone of Mini Boss? - unable to believe what he had discovered.
                Tivey: But that's impossible? How is he still alive? She should be 400 years old.
                Roswaal: So you're an experiment of my master's. That explains why you seemed to know so much about witches or the authorities.
                Emilia was in shock, paralyzed by the revelation. Not only did she discover that Al was a clone of her knight, but apparently she was a clone of Satella.
                For Emilia, this was confirmation that all those people who discriminated against her were right; after all, she was the reincarnation of the witch of envy.
                Emilia was thinking: So that's why Subaru loved me? Just because I'm a copy of Satella? That thought alone destroyed Emilia.

                I'm sorry I didn't answer sooner, but I was busy and lacking inspiration.
                I hope that fragment helps you; I wasn't quite sure how to continue

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                1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Thu 10 Jul 2025 04:11AM UTC

                  Süs

                  Thank you, this is really good, I actually plant on keeping the Baby Clone being Emilia secret until Fortuna showed up. But maybe it is right to fasten up things, im not sure so please forgive me if I decide to prolong some things, as always thank you for your co-operation

                  Thank you, i hope we can finish this chapter soon.

                  PS: Why do they have no reaction to Beako/Beatrice ?

                  Last Edited Thu 10 Jul 2025 04:26AM UTC

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                  1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Thu 10 Jul 2025 10:05AM UTC

                    I couldn't think of what to put for his reaction

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            5. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sun 10 Aug 2025 05:42PM UTC

              Süs

              Hi Ki, I already started writing the next Chapter please take a look and add what you want, please. I hope im not to much of a burden.

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              1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sun 10 Aug 2025 06:26PM UTC

                Ok, I'll do it
                But now I have to go to a birthday party when I can.

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                1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sun 10 Aug 2025 07:44PM UTC

                  Süs

                  Thanks, I don't now whose birthday it is but good luck.

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        3. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Jul 2025 12:47PM UTC

          Süs

          Hey ki, i send you another Co-creator request please look at it, oh! And please don't limit yourself to only add things after the ending of what it write, it's totally fine if you have something to improve the part that's already there, please speak up if you have more things you want to Add.

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    5. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sat 12 Jul 2025 04:38AM UTC

      Süs

      Hey ki, I continued working on chapter 5, please look at it in add something please.

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    6. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Mon 21 Jul 2025 07:38AM UTC

      Süs

      Hi ki? Didn't you get my last message? Sorry if im pushy. I just realy want your help.

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      1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Mon 21 Jul 2025 08:30AM UTC

        I received it, I'll check it out when I can

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        1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Mon 21 Jul 2025 09:07AM UTC

          Süs

          Thank you, please tell me your opinion and add what you can, thank you.

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    8. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 07:11PM UTC

      Süs

      Hey Ki I worked further on the new fic, please take a look and tell me how you feel about it and what you would want to add.

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      1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 08:44PM UTC

        Hello
        I'm sorry for being inactive, but I've been busy this week, but the weekend has already started, so I'll try to write more.

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      2. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 09:10PM UTC

        Satella sat with her eyes wide open. Her pink mouth hung ajar. She had lost every game, and they had played more than thirty times. Subaru was surprised at first. He hadn't expected the Great Calamity to be so bad at board games. Her grand strategy was to throw all her pieces to the slaughter. What was this woman who had nearly destroyed the world like?

        Mimi: Mimi wonders too. Is this really the witch who wiped out half the world?
        Garfiel: As expected of my capital, he beat that witch.
        Rem: I knew my hero would be able to defeat that evil witch.
        Emilia: Subaru is amazing. He defeated the Witch of Envy.
        Anastasia: I doubt that's an achievement. Satella might be a living calamity, but she doesn't seem very smart, so I doubt she'd be good at a strategy game.
        Priscilla: Apparently, you also inherited your intelligence from your original half-demon. - Mocking Emilia

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        1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 09:18PM UTC

          I'm not quite sure how Emilia should respond.
          Should she ignore Priscilla or defend herself against her mockery?

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      4. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 09:30PM UTC

        Although the seal that trapped them forced him not to eat or drink, sleep was still essential. Strangely, they couldn't dream. When Subaru fell asleep there, his mind grew dark and cloudy. Was this how he felt? Wasn't he dreaming? Satella must have felt very lonely at night. At that moment, something stirred inside the man in the orange tracksuit.
        Beatrice: Typical of my contractor, he cares more for others than himself.
        Wilhelm: It's natural for a husband to care for his wife. I'd do the same if I were Theresia.
        Felix: Not eating or drinking? Not being able to dream? That sounds horrible, I wouldn't wish that on the witch herself.
        Julius: No wonder the witch is so unhinged. Not only did she lose her children, but she was also trapped in that place for 400 years. Anyone would go crazy because of that. I just hope Subaru finds a way out. I don't want to imagine what would happen if he were trapped for years or decades in that seal.

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      5. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 09:34PM UTC

        The silver-haired woman sat on her knees. Her purple gaze fell upon the black ground; the thought of him leaving her brought a handful of tears to her eyes. The grieving Witch's crying only stopped when she heard what she most desired. A gentle hand reached out to the tearful Destroyer.

        Subaru: "If you would like, it would be fine if you joined me."

        Her face turned a deep crimson, and warmth flooded her pearly cheeks. A faint smile spread across her rosy lips. Everything was becoming blurry.

        Satella: "Oh, Subaru, you idiot."

        She fainted in his sturdy arms, unconsciously enjoying his touch. Love. Satella, the greatest of evil, loved Natsuki Subaru, the weakest knight, and would stop at nothing to make him hers.

        Emilia; It's not fair. I should be the one sleeping with Subaru, not that witch," she yelled in jealousy.
        Frederica: Emilia-sama, don't say that out loud. It could be misinterpreted.
        Emilia: Misinterpreted how? I don't see anything wrong with him sleeping with my knight.

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      6. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Jul 2025 09:37PM UTC

        I left some ideas there, I hope you like them.
        Continue later.
        P.S. I found our fanfic on Wattpad.

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        1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sat 26 Jul 2025 05:06AM UTC

          Süs

          I've seen them, and I'm very impressed with it, i already added it to the story, I must say im very grateful for your co-operation, thank you,

          Ps: what do you by "you found or fanfic on Wattpad ?"

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          1. Kifhjoofff on Chapter 1 Sat 26 Jul 2025 01:40PM UTC

            https://www.wattpad.com/1562244127-reaccionando-a-400-años-contigo-capitulo-1

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            1. AlmDragonrend on Chapter 1 Sun 27 Jul 2025 08:27AM UTC

              Süs

              Oh! Somebody has translated our fic on Watpad, was that you? Because I can't remember doing it.

              By the way, if continued with the first chapter a bit further, please tell me what you think about it, and add what you want.

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