Comment on The Rain Fell Down, and Washed Everything Away

  1. brokshi on Chapter 1 Fri 20 Jun 2025 06:01AM UTC

    Not often I'm just a commenter for your writing! Really like how, despite Susie being her own #1 detractor, she's picking up on all the ways Kris is different from the SOUL very quickly, and brushing them off as Kris being tired or her being wrong. She's not oblivious, just uninformed with a low self-esteem. Excited to see where this goes, will Kris be honest with her? Will she take that well? How much will Ralsei fuck it up by noticing the SOUL is gone? So many paths.

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