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  1. That1Bear029 on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 07:27PM UTC

    Do my eyes deceive me?

    A new fic...ABOUT THE TWINS!!!

    This was so cute! Loved it! It was so fun to see Max and Maria's personalities as they've grown up a bit. I also loved how we can see traits, either big or small, in both of them that reflect Moxxie and Millie.

    Absolutely adored getting a glimpse into their relationships with each other and some of their other family members. Just great work again! I'd love to see more of Max and Maria in your other works!

    Sidenote: I don't know if I missed it somewhere, or if I don't remember, but would you mind sharing a bit of what Max and Maria look like? I imagine that they share mixed traits between M&M, but do either of them take after one parent more in terms of physical appearance, or would you say they're just more of a 50/50 mix? If that makes sense.

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    1. olicityfangirl24 on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Jun 2025 09:40PM UTC

      Yes! I love writing the twins and am so excited to write more of their adventures in this fan fic as well as other characters’ stories.

      And yeah, Max has like the extroverted traits of both his parents while Maria is a bit more introverted. Their likes, dislikes and other traits will be more fleshed out and explored in future chapters. I have one Maria and Sallie May chapter idea I can’t wait to write about.

      I don’t think I wrote their physical descriptions anywhere so that is something I’ll have to think about. I would say they maybe both look like mini Moxxie and Millie in terms of appearance so maybe 50/50. I did want both of the kids to have Millie’s gap teeth so I would say that is canon in this fic, but as for other physical features idk. Maybe one day I’ll draw them and put the picture in this fic (not best artist, but I’ll try my best).

      Anyway glad you liked this and if you haven’t already please bookmark so you can be alerted when I post another chapter.

      Thanks so much for your kind words and I hope to write another chapter soon.

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      1. That1Bear029 on Chapter 1 Sun 29 Jun 2025 02:06AM UTC

        AWWW! I can't wait to read that one! That would be soo cute to see the relationship Maria has with Sallie😭

        It's funny you mention the picture. I'm posting a lil sketch I did the other day of young Millie and Onyx next chapter🤣

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