Damn I don't even go here and have watched only a few harry potter movies, but this is still a fantastic start to the fic. I like your narrative style. How you describe things as happening but you don't like go into the nitty gritty back and forth sentences of each and every scene. It's very effective at presenting the larger picture of what is happening. It also shows how she sees the world, altogether I kind of want to study your writing style XD cos like in the past when I write things with a focus on narration, I'm always thinking in the back of my head "oh shit I can't have most of it be narration" because "if I narrate too much, I'm telling instead of showing" or "if I narrate too much, I'm getting into the characters head too much and the story isn't progressing" - but the reason this fic stood out to me is you've written something kickass while breaking all those little rules I had inside my own head. So yeah genuinely, thanks for writing this
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wei_wei_wei on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Jul 2025 07:52AM UTC
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