Finally getting around to catching up on the chapters I've missed. Finally reading the Fusion Trilogy! And we're already off to a fantastic start! Loved the revisions here, with Dipper & Mabel tagging along for the ride, each with their own feelings on the whole thing. Dipper being the supportive big brother, assuring Stevonnie they can bail if they want, while Mabel is in full supportive mode, wanting them to go out there and show themselves. Wendy was also a great addition, continuing to be an awesome big sister archetype, and being the one to invite them to the dance. Also loved how you really handled Stevonnie's uncomfortableness this time around, emphasising how they feel uncomfortable around others, until they finally decide to cut lose and not be afraid of showing themselves off. Really good stuff.
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FaroeKing on Chapter 25 Fri 11 Jul 2025 08:52PM UTC
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