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1. FountainPenguin on Chapter 19 Tue 22 Jul 2025 06:02PM UTC

   

   Thanks! I'm so glad the vibes came across; I really struggled with that last scene, but I'm very happy with the result :')

   Martyn's so nervous, but he's finally in a safe place... He just doesn't know that yet 3 Gotta test the boundaries in his own Martyn way. I really went back and forth for a long time on whether to show the fishing scene (Martyn POV) or not, but I'm glad I did it this way so we get to feel Martyn's absence just like Bdubs. Happy to hear Martyn's exhaustion came through even if we only see it second-hand.

   Shout-out to Bdubs and the slow creep of revelation... It's fine, it's all fiiiiine...

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