Chaotic Bagel (Guest)
on Chapter 18
Thu 31
Jul 202501:15AM UTC
ASDCFVGBHNJMKJHYGTFRDFVBHJUYTRDS 3RD LIFE IS HERE!!!!! or was, i suppose. aaaaaagh this was so painfully tragic ;-;. although it did feel a bit rushed? it was still a really good chapter though ofc, and the parts that did get in were very good. also the watcher/concil reveal at the beginning??? awesome, i can't believe i didn't see it coming!!! great fic as always <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Yeah, as much as I wanted to do more with this chapter, it fought me, so this is what we ended up getting. Probably didn't help that I wanted to get to the implications of the waters and council because I have so many ideas for that.
Honestly, I'm not sure if the texting format works well with the games, considering there's not many messages in chat that are sent in the actual games, an my writing tends to lend more to what's going on than anything, but I didn't want to just abandon the messaging aspect, even if it didn't want to work all that well with me lol
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