Comment on The Grip of Fatigue

  1. You can't keep playing with my emotions like this! At first I thought Ed's gonna die when he got knocked down (had the warnings hidden), I thought there would be no kidnapping, then went "That doc is sus.... Hmm....", having a FUCKING KNEW IT moment, be relieved, ONLY TO REVEAL THE NURSE WAS A COMPLETE PSYCHOOOOO

    I am excited for whatever comes next.

    Ah, also Al being in silent anger throughout the fic is refreshing! Looking forward for the next chapter!

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    1. One piece <3

      HAHA TYYYY! 😭 I’m so glad it hit the way I hoped! I really tried to avoid the usual murder mystery clichés, and while I’m not sure I nailed it perfectly, it means a lot that you enjoyed it!

      thx for reading!

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