i really love how you write akito's narration!! i feel like you characterize him so well with the wording you use and the structure of your sentences in a way that's so deeply intertwined with the whole fic. i also really liked the actual singing and performing aspect of this lol. the pacing for it was absolutely perfect, and it didn't feel too short or drag on too long which can be SO easy to do, so big kudos to you for that! idk this fic is so cute in general too beyond the high quality of the writing. theyre so in love..... also the art included is so cool!!!!! (also also the little blurb with toya's mom at the end is really cute. i appreciated that lol)
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archaicanemoia on Chapter 1 Tue 19 Aug 2025 05:20PM UTC
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