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  1. Omg another chapter!!!!! This was a treat!

    I love everything about this! Kaladin teaching Szeth to sing and breathe deeply, and Szeth going back to that on hard nights. The keteks were better than anything I’ve been able to come up with. Masha listening to Szeth and being there for him, and recognizing when he’s getting stuck in his head!!!! I love how you write them so much!! And Szeth telling her she’s a candle!!!! I gasped at that line, then teared up a bit.

    This was beautiful 💜🥺🫂🥰

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    1. Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh! Whenever you comment, it's always like seeing a celebrity for me because I love your Szeth so much and you are my role model for writing him! 🤩

      Thank youuuu so so much for your kind words and I'm sooo happy you told me the parts you liked the best!!! I was trying so hard to make the candle part meaningful/sweet and not sappy/ooc, I think I rewrote it like five times, so I'm so glad it worked!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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