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  1. Reclusive_Raven on Chapter 2 Sun 07 Sep 2025 06:24PM UTC

    [...it made him look like an impatient cat…] They are both cat adjacent and I love that for them

    [...tried seeing if Leo’s portals would bring him back to his own dimension…he’d ended up falling face-first back into Donnie’s lab.] Interesting.. his portal could bring him to the dimension by accident but not back by command. Maybe it's a thing his ninpo did to give Leo and subsequently Donnie, needed support. Because who can better understand an unexpected transformation than someone who's going through something similar?

    [Wait a second…] One might even say "Wait for it" :3

    [So… they haven’t faced Shredder yet?] Ooo

    [Twins. Such annoying creatures.] WHEEZE

    [Leo saw this as the perfect opportunity to slip out of the lab unnoticed.] Continuing them being cat adjacent, just like when your cat knows they aren't supposed to leave the room but they do it anyway.

    [Where did that fish-brained idiot go?] I can't wait to see all the insults/names they came up with for each other.

    ["Dude, I’m right here. No need to yell.”] LMAO
    Poor dude must be so confused.
    This whole scene killed me, I love it!
    And other Leo waving, pfft

    [He couldn’t fault anyone for seeing him as a monstrosity.] My heart!

    I love their banter, I'm devouring it.
    I wanted to say more, but I got too sucked into the story. Every time I stopped giggling, another joke hit me. The ending was brutal, amazing! <3

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    1. Cimmerian1275 on Chapter 2 Tue 09 Sep 2025 02:39AM UTC

      [I can't wait to see all the insults/names they came up with for each other.] AHHH THEY DONT HAVE ENOUGH STUPID NICKNAMES FOR EACH OTHER...... gotta work on brainstorming more now, Donnies been given a few nicknames in my head that ill probably add in the rewrite 👀

      [Every time I stopped giggling, another joke hit me.] Eheheheheheehehe, yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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